Hi Charlie! I really like your writing, I can see you've been practising your words a lot, and you were able to clearly describe what happened in the story. Lions are my favourite animal, I wonder if a real lion would be very helpful in a library, though?! You've done a great job of listing all of the words with the same ending, too, well done!
Wow Charlie, What a lot of work you have done I'm impressed. I wonder if you could make a silly sentence with all those cool words you have made? I have not read the book ' Lion in the Library ' do you think you could read it to me when we get back to school?
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Hi Charlie! I really like your writing, I can see you've been practising your words a lot, and you were able to clearly describe what happened in the story. Lions are my favourite animal, I wonder if a real lion would be very helpful in a library, though?! You've done a great job of listing all of the words with the same ending, too, well done!
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ReplyDeleteWhat a lot of work you have done I'm impressed. I wonder if you could make a silly sentence with all those cool words you have made?
I have not read the book ' Lion in the Library ' do you think you could read it to me when we get back to school?