Tuesday 12 May 2020

Max writing/reading Wk5

3 comments:

  1. Great job on the description of Mum. She sure is kind and caring. You have said some lovely things about your Mum. Well done. Your picture id gorgeous too. I enjoyed looking at your menu for Mum's lunch. Yum. What do you like to have for lunch?

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  2. Max you've done a lovely job here! I like the way you planned out what you were going to say about Mum, and then turned it into sentences. You sure do know a lot about her! I also like the list of things Mum will have for lunch - did you make lunch for Mum, or help with it?

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  3. Wow Max,
    What a lot of amazing work you have done. This fantastic story would of made your mum feel very loved.
    Your picture and the lovely words you wrote are very cool.
    Well done Max

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