Wednesday 6 May 2020
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Wow Oliver, you've done some fabulous work here! I like that you've shown clearly the correct way to write your letters, and your punctuation and use of verbs and adjectives is a marvellous way to tell your story. I like cricket as well, do you have a favourite cricket player?
ReplyDeleteYay Oliver!
ReplyDeleteWhat great learning you have been doing! I love your 'Show Don't Tell' sentences - I could really tell how you were feeling. Great job adding punctuation to the sentences. I can't wait to read your next piece of writing. Keep up the good work!
Hi Oliver,
ReplyDeleteFantastic work,did you get the knot out of the string and did your frown turn into a smile? Very good writing , I love how all your letters are on the line. Brilliant work Oliver.