Friday 1 May 2020

Student Blog Hop Max Writing Wk3

2 comments:

  1. Hi Max. I really like your story about Paddington Bear, he's fabulous, isn't he? I didn't know that Paddington had medals from the war, thanks for sharing that information. I think anyone who has been in to war is very brave, just like Paddington. I wonder what his job was, in the war?

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  2. Wow Max,
    I love your Paddington Bear, so cool. What is in his bag?
    Thank you for sharing your story, i would like to meet him one day,maybe you could bring him into school when we go back.
    Keep up the great work Max.

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