Ruby wrote a story a while ago about an autumn walk.
Tuesday 5 May 2020
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Gosh Ruby, this sounds like a really fun walk! The autumn colours of the leaves make things look pretty, don't they? It sounds like you had a nice time exploring on your scooter and seeing the leaves, did your brother and sister go on scooters as well?
ReplyDeleteHi Ruby,
ReplyDeleteI love your story. You have added a lot of detail in your writing. I am so glad you posted it and am really impressed! I have been noticing all the coloured leaves at my house too. Aren't they pretty? I wonder if you will do some leaf rubbings like we did at school last term.
Wow Ruby,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great story, you have really sounded out your words, Brilliant. I wish i had a pink scooter, can you fast on it?
Love everything about your post, cant wait to see your next one.