Tuesday 12 May 2020
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Great re-telling Harry! I really like the way you've split the story into three parts, beginning, middle, and end. I can't wait to see what else you have done!
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ReplyDeleteYou have done a lot of work, I love the way you have sounded out your words and your pictures are amazing.
keep up the great work.
Hi Harry. Great work sequencing the story. I enjoyed reading Mum's Octopus too. What was your favourite part of the story? I wonder if you could describe the Octopus? Keep up the great posts!
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