Thursday 7 May 2020
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Cool story Alyssa! I like that you've made a brainstorm of all of the ideas you wanted to put in your story, great work. I'm a bit worried about Connor's seat being on Dad's bike though, where does Connor sit?! Did it take you a long time to bike to the forest?
ReplyDeleteHi Whaea Bex, thanks for your comment. No need to worry about where Connor sits, he has an extra seat on Dad's bike in front of Dad's seat. He holds onto the handlebars with Dad - Alyssa
DeleteOh that sounds cool! Thank goodness he still has a seat! 😉
DeleteWow Alyssa,
ReplyDeleteI love your story, your bike sounds very cool. Do you like riding your bike in the forest? When you get bigger you might be able to get a bike with gears too! I can see lots of full stops and capital letters,well done.
Hi Sam, thanks for your comment. I love biking in the forest and I hope my next bike has gears - Alyssa
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