Tuesday 21 April 2020

Charlotte Robertson - Week 2 Writing



3 comments:

  1. Gosh Charlotte, you've used so many great describing words to tell us about the leaves you found! The autumn weather has really started to come in, hasn't it? You found very tall tree to have your picture taken with! Keep up the great work, I really enjoyed your story!

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  2. Wow Charlotte,
    Look at that amazing story, I love your finger spaces and your full stops.
    I don't think it will be long before all the leaves on the tree in your picture will be on the ground. What to you think we could to with them all? maybe we could create some art with them, do you have any ideas of what we could make?
    Great work Charlotte keep it up.

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  3. I am so impressed by all your adjectives Charlotte. Well done on such a great story and a beautiful photo to go with it. Well done Charlotte.

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