Hi Ella, What a cute little dinosaur you have drawn. It looks a fun book, can you extend your writing and tell me more about it? Are there more dinosaurs in the book, what do they get up to? I look forward to seeing your next blog. Mrs Ferguson
Hi Ella, that's a very cute dinosaur. I'd love to hear more about what happens in the book, does your dinosaur have a name? If you had a pet dinosaur, what would you call it?!
Hi Ella, that looks like a great story. I haven't read it before. I love looking at your beautiful letters. You are getting better and better at your writing. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories.
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ReplyDeleteWhat a cute little dinosaur you have drawn. It looks a fun book, can you extend your writing and tell me more about it? Are there more dinosaurs in the book, what do they get up to?
I look forward to seeing your next blog.
Mrs Ferguson
Hi Ella, that's a very cute dinosaur. I'd love to hear more about what happens in the book, does your dinosaur have a name? If you had a pet dinosaur, what would you call it?!
ReplyDeleteHi Ella, that looks like a great story. I haven't read it before. I love looking at your beautiful letters. You are getting better and better at your writing. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories.
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