Thursday 30 April 2020
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Hi Ella. What a great brainstorm you did about your teddy. I liked the adjectives you used in your story e.g pink tent, fluffy blanket, pink marshmellows, little white bunny. I'm interested to know how did your teddy help the bunny find his mum? Can't wait to see your next post.
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ReplyDeleteYour teddy looks very cute and wow she has a pink tent, wish i had a pink tent! What happened to the white marshmallows? Did teddy share the pink ones with the bunny? I love your wonderful imagination.
keep up your fantastic work Ella.
Gosh Ella, I think your teddy has had a fantastic adventure! It's very clear that you've spent lots of time making sure your writing is neat and tidy, it makes it really easy for me to ready your great story! Keep up the great work!
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