Tuesday 21 April 2020
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Hi Charlie,
ReplyDeleteI love how you have used your senses to describe being in the clouds. Looks like you are very high up in the air! Where would you fly to?
Thanks for sharing.
Mrs Ferguson
Hi Mrs Ferguson, I would fly right up to the moon!! From Charlie
DeleteHi Charlie, you've done a really super job describing all of the things that you could see, smell, hear, and feel. I agree I think it would be very lonely up there if you were there for long, great story
ReplyDeleteHi Charlie,
ReplyDeleteMaybe you could take a friend with you then you will not get lonely. This is a fantastic story i wonder what you could touch when you are floating in the air and what it would feel like, what do you think?
Well done Charlie