This is a little story Ella wrote about a trip to McDonald's that she had with her dad.
Thursday 23 April 2020
Student Blog Hop Ella Sinclair Writing
This is a little story Ella wrote about a trip to McDonald's that she had with her dad.
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Hi Ella,
ReplyDeleteWhat clear writing you have! I can tell that you enjoy going to McDonald's with your dad. I'm sure it won't be long before you can go there again. I'm looking forward to having takeaway food again too. I wonder what is your favourite part of a happy meal.
Hi Ella, how lovely that you got to go to McDonald's with your Dad! I enjoy the happy meals, they often have a book or a toy with them, which is fun, and a yummy drink too! Can you tell me what kind of burger did you choose?
ReplyDeleteHi Ella,
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely story. I love your finger spaces and the way you put a full stop at the end of your sentences. Well done. My children are waiting for McDonald's to open up again ,they love McDonald's.Have you missed any foods since you have been at home?