Thursday 2 April 2020
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Wow Henry - great writing today! I love the name of your character - the scientist Mr Macaroni. I hope he didn't hurt himself falling into the craters.
ReplyDeleteWould you like to travel to the moon?
No! Because I don't want to fall into craters or see aliens!
DeleteWow great job Henry! I like the name of your scientist. I hope that Mr Macaroni didn't hurt himself into the craters. I would like to go the moon too, would you?
ReplyDelete- Alyssa
No! Because I don't want to fall into the craters or see aliens!!
ReplyDeleteHey Henry! What a cool story. Do you think Mr Macaroni should get married to Ms Cheese?
ReplyDeleteHi Henry! I love your character Mr Macaroni. I also love all things about space. I wonder if you can write about some other adventures he has been on?
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