Monday 20 April 2020
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What a fabulous story Ryker! You've made me want to read more! I think you've done a fantastic job of using lots of adjectives and nouns, which makes your story so interesting to read. I can't wait until we can all go to McD's for a yummy burger like your zombie did, I think I'll choose a Big Mac, what would you choose?
ReplyDeleteHi Ryker, your zombie certainly sounds scary! I loved the way you used words like ' creepy', and 'terrible bite' to describe him. You gave me a picture in my mind. I must say that I am looking forward to a yummy burger from McDonalds too! I wonder what might happen next.
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