Wow Mikah, this looks like a fabulous story! I like that Bear and Flea are friends at the end. You've done a great job of retelling the story, well done!
Hi Mikah, What a great retell of the story. Did the comic strip help you? I especially liked the ending where they were friends again. I also liked all the capital letters and full stops you remembered. Great work!
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Hi Mikah, this is a fantastic retell of the story you read. I like how you have showed the beginning, middle and end. Great job!
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Wow Mikah, this looks like a fabulous story! I like that Bear and Flea are friends at the end. You've done a great job of retelling the story, well done!
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ReplyDeleteWhat a great retell of the story. Did the comic strip help you? I especially liked the ending where they were friends again. I also liked all the capital letters and full stops you remembered. Great work!