Hi Noah, I can see that you are concentrating hard on your story about Belle. I love how you spelled 'because'. Clever boy! I wonder what Belle eats and where she sleeps. What colour is she? I also can't help but wonder what happened to your arm. I hope it isn't too itchy. I look forward to the next time you share your writing. Maybe you can tell me what happened to your arm. Keep up the great work!
Hi Mrs Shea, Thank you, I am trying quite hard at home most of the time. Belle eats stinky cat food, and sleeps on my bed. Belle is a black and white cat and quite small.
I broke my wrist after I did Mums really cool obstacle course in the back yard, I swung on the clothes line and slipped and landed on it.
Hi Noah Belle is a great name for your cat. Can you describe her? I have a cat called Mandy. She is a tabby. She looks a little like a tiger. She likes to sleep on my bed or in the linen cupboard.
Hi Noah Great work you are very lucky to have a cat. What colour is your cat? Maybe you could colour your cat in. I love the name of your cat. My daughter is called Bella and I call her Bell for short.
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Hi Noah,
ReplyDeleteI can see that you are concentrating hard on your story about Belle. I love how you spelled 'because'. Clever boy! I wonder what Belle eats and where she sleeps. What colour is she? I also can't help but wonder what happened to your arm. I hope it isn't too itchy. I look forward to the next time you share your writing. Maybe you can tell me what happened to your arm. Keep up the great work!
Hi Mrs Shea,
DeleteThank you, I am trying quite hard at home most of the time. Belle eats stinky cat food, and sleeps on my bed. Belle is a black and white cat and quite small.
I broke my wrist after I did Mums really cool obstacle course in the back yard, I swung on the clothes line and slipped and landed on it.
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Hi Noah
ReplyDeleteBelle is a great name for your cat. Can you describe her? I have a cat called Mandy. She is a tabby. She looks a little like a tiger. She likes to sleep on my bed or in the linen cupboard.
She is small and furry, her fur is black and white. Belle likes to sleep on my bed too, especially if its sunny or on cold nights.
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Hi Noah
ReplyDeleteGreat work you are very lucky to have a cat. What colour is your cat? Maybe you could colour your cat in. I love the name of your cat. My daughter is called Bella and I call her Bell for short.
Thank you, she is black and white and quite small. I named her after a train on Thomas the Tank Engine. She is 3 and a half years old now.
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