Thursday 16 April 2020

Harry MacKay Writing week 1


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  2. Oh Harry, what an amazing super power that would be! I am interested to know what kind of good times you would freeze your friends into, will they be frozen still, or can they still enjoy the fun they're having but never leave? I'd also love to hear more about the pizza you'll be eating - it's one of my favourite foods!!

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  3. Hi Harry. I'm impressed by all the writing posts you have been putting up on the blog lately, keep up the great work! I like your idea of freezing the good times. What good times would you like to freeze? I would like to freeze a memory of our performance of Māui and the Sun, we had so much fun as a hub doing this production. It was great to see your brainstorm Harry and how you included these ideas into your writing.

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