Sunday 19 April 2020
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Hi Max,
ReplyDeleteI like your story of Goldilocks and how you leave your audience in suspense at the end, not knowing whether Goldilocks will become the bears breakfast or will wake up just in time. The story ties in well with Mrs McKay's work on temperature, with the hot and cold porridge.
The butterflies in the park sound amazing. I wish I could have been there to see them too.
Keep up the great work.
Mrs Ferguson
Hi Max
ReplyDeletelook at your amazing story i am so impressed you must be working very hard. Do you have this book at home? I can remember reading Goldilocks and the three bears when i was a little girl.Maybe you could read the story to mum or dad i'm sure they would love you it. I am looking forward to reading your next story. Sam
Hi Max, Your work is fabulous. I can't believe you saw so many butterflies. How wonderful! I wonder if they were social distancing?!!!!! your retell is great too. Keep up the wonderful work.
ReplyDeleteMrs Mackay