Thursday, 23 April 2020

Eliana Writing

Little Snail has a shell for his home. His blanket is a leaf. His bed is made of grass. 1 twig is for the fridge and the other twig is for the cupboard. I think Little Snail has a baby and his baby is called Leo.
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3 comments:

  1. Sam Cleghorn23 April 2020 at 12:35

    Hi Eliana
    I love this story so much it is amazing. What does the snail keep in his fridge and cupboard? I like the name of the baby snail.Did you know snails have no ears? I wonder if you can find out more facts about snails and share them with us.
    Amazing story Eliana thanks for sharing.

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  2. Angela Shea23 April 2020 at 13:58

    Hi Eliana,
    Thats a very sweet story. I love all the details - it makes your story very interesting . I have a picture in my mind. Little snail is set up well for a happy life with baby Leo just like you are having a happy life with your Leo.

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  3. Anonymous23 April 2020 at 14:12

    Hi Eliana, what a great story! You've included lots of great details so that we want to keep reading to find out more! I love that the baby is called Leo, that is wonderful. Keep up the great work!

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