Tuesday 21 April 2020

Student Blog Hop - Max - writing week 2

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  1. Great adjectives Max. I especially liked the word "crunching". Your photo is good too. the colours are beautiful. Well done on a great job. Can you bring it along to out meeting tomorrow so we can all see it? Do you like Autumn?

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  2. Hi Max, I'm so pleased you wore warm clothes on your bike ride, autumn can be very cold and windy, can't it? I love how you've used lots of colours in your picture of a leaf, you've done a fantastic job, keep up the great work!

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  3. Hi Max,
    Cool bike. look at all those leaves on the ground i'm sure they made that crunching sound you told us about in your story. These leaves look just like the one in your story. There is so many leaves around during Autumn can you think of ways we could use some of them to create some art?

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