Friday, 17 April 2020
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Wow Esther! Your princess is a hero! I love how you've told this story, and that we got to see the squirrel be saved by a brave princess! I wonder what they'll do together now that they're home and safe?
ReplyDeleteHi Esther,
ReplyDeleteWhat an action packed story. I was wondering how you would develop your plan. Trees that can lift people up, magic carpets, I would love to visit this land, mind you, I would not want to bump into the witch!
In your next story see if you can add more description like - a grey, fluffy squirrel or a huge great tower that seemed to reach the sky.
Well done, keep up the good work.
Mrs Ferguson