Thursday 30 April 2020
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Hi Mikah, this is a great story! I like that you've used a picture of the bears to plan your writing. You've chosen some wonderful adjectives to use, too, which helps me to imagine what you must have felt and seen when you saw the bears. Were you out on a walk when you saw them?
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ReplyDeleteBrilliant story Mikah,you have used some really cool words like 'square, angry,soft. Your sounding out of words is great. Do you have any teddies in your windows? I have three teddies on my window.
Fantastic work